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Post  DarkRPGMaster Thu Feb 17, 2011 8:29 pm

I could fight your villain, Xan. Wouldn't bother me at all.
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Post  XanZerstorer Thu Feb 17, 2011 8:34 pm

Awesome!

I'mma start on this timeline before I mess up myself, lol.
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Post  DarkRPGMaster Thu Feb 17, 2011 8:43 pm

Alright. I would help, but I'm at my friend's house helping him study for the Math portion of the test he needs to enter the military.
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Post  Mrdude22 Thu Feb 17, 2011 8:44 pm

Firstly we need to decide who gets there crystal first and all that jazz.
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Post  DarkRPGMaster Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:04 pm

Hmm...we could always do something random to figure it out. Like maybe have Sanaki decide.
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Post  XanZerstorer Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:04 pm

So the part of my story would imply that...

1. Dark is in the group fairly early;
2. That I come in after him, or last;
3. That I get my crystal later as well. I need some time for the team to trust me, then go "WTF" when the whole story is revealed.
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Post  Mrdude22 Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:07 pm

I'm pretty sure Dark, Shiny , and I already have the group before you join.
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Post  XanZerstorer Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:10 pm

In this case, it works out. You guys meet up with Silkfrost, then I come in, stuff happens, and there we go =D.

I honestly don't even know when I'm summoned, lol. But I could travel on my own for a while, or be part of another team for a short while - didn't we want interactions between other people than the ones in our team at first?
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Post  Mrdude22 Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:17 pm

I have no clue.
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Post  Mrdude22 Fri Feb 18, 2011 5:21 pm

Ok, here is my idea of the order people get the crystals and the story starts.

Dark would be first (as he fights someone before Xan joins and Xan joins kinda early)
Shiny would be next and near the end of Shiny's I would go.

...and Xan you could decide where you go.
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Post  Mrdude22 Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:43 pm

Well I decided to start working on my story.
If anyone who shows up in this have a problem with anything just let me know and I'll do my best to change it.

Note: By this point Dark would have his crystal (I do believe he is going first in our group) Xan and Shiny I'm not to sure about.

Part 1/10

The opening scene will be a flashback in Hell's Throne where Dude thinks to himself 1. This whole thing seems kinda of ridiculous and 2. Why he is here with so many people that seem to have fought a lot of battles. But in the end he goes with it.

Cut back to present time where the team is just wandering along Dreams End with no real goal in mind besides the crystals of course. While the group is discussing what they should do next they notice somebody leaning against the wall. It is revealed to be Kitmeng who after some talk wants to see if these heroes are what they are cracked up to be.

Battle #1
Dude (With one of his team mates as assist) VS Kitmeng
Battle Music: Battle with the Four Fiends

After the battle Kitmeng gets up and is about to go away but not before saying "It is time to face that one..."

Dude and co. just shrug it off and continue onwards.



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Post  Mrdude22 Wed Feb 23, 2011 8:37 pm

Please criticize if there are any issues.

Part 2/10

The team are still just going along just as they usually do when they come across Fallen. Fallen states that somehow he got separated from Epic Girl and Zero and we come along to help him out.

The group travels to Planet Core to find her but get confronted by Igroundwalker and who states that Epic Girl is not far behind from demise. Cue fight scene

Fight #2
Dude (With Fallen Assist) VS Igroundwalker
After the battle Igroundwalker teleports away and the group heads up to Ultimecia's Castle where we hear Epic Girl. Fallen states he is going in alone causing us to go our separate ways.

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Post  Mrdude22 Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:25 am

Part 3/10

Note: Due to writers block for this one part most of this is Negi's idea so I can't take credit for this.

Now Blade has found the Prima Vista and wants to take it for himself (I have no clue if this would be shown in my story or Shiny's) but he knows that Shiny would also want the ship so he goes out Guardian Shadow to stop us.
We meet eachother at World of Darkness. Shiny Recognizes who it is and It is another fight

Fight #3

Dude (with Shinigami assist) VS Blade (with Guardian Shadow assist)

Blade and the villain retreat and Shiny has interest in the ship so we follow his lead to get there.


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Post  Mrdude22 Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:29 am

Part 4/10

So the party finds the Prima Vista and hop aboard. While Shiny is talking to Xan and Dark about his adventures on the ship Dude remains quiet until.
"How do you know about this ship?"
Shiny (confused by the question) responds that he used it in his adventures.
Dude (not thinking very rationally) is convinced that Shiny is hiding something about the ship and starts to attack him

Fight #4
Dude VS Shinigami (With either Dark or Xan assist)
Battle Music: Grand Cross

The fight ends with a draw and Shiny convinces Dude that he has no clue what he is talking about.
Dude calms down and apologizes for the outburst but remains silent.
The rest of the group decide to rest on the ship for now.


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Post  Mrdude22 Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:37 am

Part 5/10

The Prima Vista cruises along for a while until they notice 2 passengers on the surface
Negi and Syrup.
As Shiny (who would know how to drive the thing) goes down to pick them up, Dude tries to put his cool back on for the new people.
Negi and Shiny have a talk about stuff (in more detail in Negi's topic, don't really want to restate stuff) when suddenly Stunna and Ballandchain appear. (take them down for easy prey Ballandchain went along all that jazz) Seems like a normal battle until Stunna starts gloating.
He heard that voice before
The voice of a madman.
The voice of a murderer
Dude realizing who it is starts to rush in while Negi is going after ballandchain

Fight #5
Dude (With Negi assist) VS Stunna (With Ballandchain assist)
Battle Music: Awakening

After the fight the two villains Get out but before anyone can relax the ship catches on fire. and Shiny,Dark and Xan push Negi off the ship, Dude stands still haunted by the sense of terrible deja vu...

End the first part with a cliffhanger!



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Post  Mrdude22 Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:44 am

Part 6/10

Dude wakes up at Orphan's Cradle noticing that the rest of the group are still knocked out. but he notices someone lurking by Shiny

Syrup about to kill him.
Dude gets up and rushes towards Syrup attacking him.
Syrup shocked by someone getting up from a fall like that doesn't see it coming and turns to face Dude

Fight #6
Dude VS Syrup
Battle Theme: Blinded by Light

After the fight Syrup begins to retreat but not before saying
"I don't have time for you! As I still need to make Negi's life a living hell! *insert evil laugh here*"

After he goes off Dude limps away from his comrades as he needs to figure out what has been going on and how the past was reliving itself.


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Post  Mrdude22 Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:53 am

Part 7/10

As Dude continues his travels alone he finds Dragmire along with Zell who ask him why a warrior would travel on his own.
Dude replies so he can find the point to the whole war.
Dragmire responds by "Explaining" that the war is meant for the Shadow Lurkers to conquer the weak. Start battle and all that jazz

Battle #7
Dude VS Dragmire (With Zell assist)
Battle Music: Dungeon

After the battle Zell says that there is no point to the war and it is just a silly game played by the gods before getting out of there.
The part ends with Dude resolving to find Sanaki to find the answer to everything that has been going on.

AAAND I'll finish this up tomorrow
Gotta get some sleep.


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Post  Mrdude22 Thu Feb 24, 2011 11:57 am

Well time to finish this up

Part 8/10

Dude makes it to Hell's Throne where see's Sanaki sitting on the throne.
Dude asks him what is the point of this whole war and Sanaki explains (I'm not going into detail here cause I don't want to get it wrong)
Then Dude asks why he was chosen to fight in the whole war.
Sanaki tells him that there are many reasons for everybody he summoned into the war but one of them is a test to conquer the past.
Dude asks him one more thing. If Sanaki is the one commandeering the whole side how strong is he? and Challenges him to a friendly battle
Fight #8
Dude VS Sanaki
Battle Music: Crystal Tower (can change)

After some fighting Sanaki ends the battle on his own and tells him that his group are at the Rift and he should catch up with them.


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Post  Mrdude22 Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:05 pm

Part 9/10

Dude finds Xan, Dark and Shiny at the Rift and meets up with them.
He tells them that it isn't a team without the leader.
The group questions where he has been and he answers them and tells them a bit about his past to answer why he was acting weird earlier.

But first he tells them he needs to go again to take Stunna down as it is the top priority right now.
The group is ok with this until they see two people coming at them. NarutoVSIchigo. (and some other villain who I don't know quite yet) Stunna's "Minions"
They are surprised that they survived the crash and were told by Stunna to just kill anybody who they come across.

Fight #9
Dude (with someone from the group as assist) VS NarutoVSIchigo. (with the other villain as assist)

After the battle the group retreats and Dude tells the others he needs to head off to find Stunna and finish the battle.


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Post  Mrdude22 Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:23 pm

Part 10/10

Dude comes across Crystal World where he sees Stunna plotting something or another.
Stunna not even noticing him starts his "Talk to himself Villain monologue" where he talks his plans over...out load. After Stunna mentions killing others to take there power Dude interrupts him (rough draft script format!)

Dude: So is that why you killed everyone on that ship!?
*Stunna turns around shocked to see someone spying on him*
Stunna: A spy from Chip!!?...no just a measly Warrior of Cosmos (or whatever we call the good guys)
Dude: I don't know how someone is measly when they kicked your ass good!
Stunna: I was...weakened shall we say then.
Dude: Sure just make up excuses...
Stunna: You insolent bastard! I'll kill you here
Dude: Well you already failed that twice...
Stunna: Twice...?
Dude: So I see you don't even REMEMBER the countless lives you took before!
Stunna: ...Hahaha! So people SURVIVE those attacks! hmph no matter! You won't ever be able to tell the tale again!
Dude: I do believe it is the other way around. I'm taking you down even if I'm going down with you! (Foreshadowing!)

Fight #10
Dude VS Stunna
Battle Music: You're Not Alone

After the battle Stunna noticing he is losing teleports away quickly so Dude can't make the final blow.
(more rough script format!)
Dude: Damnit! he got away...hmm? what is that light...?
*A light flashes and a crystal appears in Dude's hands*
Dude: ...So this rock is the item we need to end this war? Wouldn't have thought so myself....Well might as well head back to the others...Stunna is going to have to wait.

And so Dude heads back to his team once again.

Depending on whether Shiny has his Crystal yet one of two things will happen

1. If Shiny doesn't have his crystal yet Dude will just come along while he works on getting it
2. If Shiny does have his they will tell him that Sanaki is wanting the warriors to come to Hell's Throne.

...Ok that is what I got so far.
Hooray.
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Post  NegiBozu203 Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:45 pm

Cool, I really like it.

And just real quick, for the record, Truth4You is NarutoVSIchigo.
Narutovsichigo is the troll name we're using.
He gets kind of pissed when people continue calling him a troll and all that when he doesn't do that anymore.
Just saying, remember to use the name NarutovsIchigo.
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Post  Mrdude22 Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:47 pm

Ok I'll change that
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Post  Mrdude22 Tue Mar 08, 2011 1:36 pm

Err...this is weird.

I'm watching a LP of FFXIII and the backstory for Dude is a bit similar for Lightning....
just felt like sharing
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Post  shinigamigodX Tue Mar 08, 2011 2:35 pm

yay! im here! cnt believe i missed this board for almost a month. hahaha
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Post  DarkRPGMaster Tue Mar 08, 2011 5:15 pm

lol what took you?
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